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Finished with Story one, sorry for not providing links to other pages, I'm really bad at that so I don't want to mess with it. At least I contributed! --Muffinmonk 04:46, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Not bad, but you might want to keep a couple things in mind. First, this is more or less to be written in-universe; along that line, don't reference things like "the comic" or "the story" and so forth. Secondly, make sure you write with the assumption that the reader might not know anything; the summaries should explain things in a way that's clear even to someone unfamiliar with the story. Lastly, watch your pronouns; there were a few instances here where terms were used incorrectly (her instead of him, you instead of her, etc.).
As a little hint, if you're unfamiliar with making links, an easy way to get used to it is to type two brackets [[ and then the first few letters of the article you want; the system will suggest the likely terms and you can click on the one you want to insert it automatically. CrazyLea 19:43, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

It can't be "springtime in knothole". Sonic's birthday was in issue 68! --YaMamasMeatloaf (talk) 01:17, August 23, 2014 (UTC)YaMamasMeatloaf

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